The word order doesn't bother me; the ambiguity does. Sloppiness of this sort is somewhat forgivable in a newspaper headline; newspapers have deadlines, after all, and are read once and thrown away. But in something meant to be sung for generations, it is rather disappointing.
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Date: 2011-04-16 09:04 pm (UTC)